Jaime’s feedback definitely exceeded my expectations. She gave detailed and high quality feedback on my script’s plot, characterization, dialogue, and setting, and addressed specific questions I had about my script. She has a great ear for dialogue and sense for character motivation.
I also appreciated how she offered suggestions to address the challenges she identified, but she never presented these in a domineering way. She let the story always feel like mine. However, I actually am just finishing a major edit based on a couple of her ideas to strengthen the characters and make the mystery in my murder mystery more challenging, and appealing, to solve.
I’ve already recommended her to friends working on their own writing projects.